A Haiku Each Day

Sixty-two hundred and five Syllables a year.

Puddlejump

Parking lot puddle
Bathing sparrows splash their wings
In reflected sky.

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  Rick Daddario wrote @

yes. i like this. every piece of the image is clear. in fact (only imo) you do not need “bathing” or “reflected” – the reader can figure that out.

parking lot puddle
sparrows splash their wings
in the sky

…of course… there are other ways of doing it too – including the way you have it. i like this image. i like this haiku.


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